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Topic: All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults.
What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled? what is the general topic?
What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled? what is the general topic?
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The stages of writing
1 Analysing and understanding the task
2 idea generation (main ideas are extended with supporting statements and examples with the help of ‘and so’?
3 planning (general outlay of the essay)
4 writing stage
5 Post writing – Proofreading after you finish your essay. Read quickly to notice mistakes in grammar e.g. articles, prepositions, spelling, punctuation
1 Analysing and understanding the task
2 idea generation (main ideas are extended with supporting statements and examples with the help of ‘and so’?
3 planning (general outlay of the essay)
4 writing stage
5 Post writing – Proofreading after you finish your essay. Read quickly to notice mistakes in grammar e.g. articles, prepositions, spelling, punctuation
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Planning
Intro:
Obesity serious problem. Both children and adults affected. Let’s take look at causes and solutions.
Body 1
Main idea / Central idea Cause: The change in eating habits
Adults – busy with work or studies and so? what it means? no time for cooking healthy meal. And so? More consumption pre-packaged / frozen or fast food
Children: less traditional healthy food at home and school canteens. High intake of junk food e.g. hamburgers, chips, and fried chicken
Solution
Adults: government; increase the sales tax on junk food / encourage healthy lifestyle e.g. by campaigns
Children: more healthy food at home/ strict control of school canteens And so? decreases the intake of unhealthy food
Body 2
Main idea 2 Inactive lifestyle. Modern facilities make us lazy. Too much time in front of the screen / less exercise outdoors. energy transfers into fat and so? leads to health problems
Body 2
Solution for the Main idea 2
Controlling the screen timing / exercising. And so? burn energy, keep fit and healthy. Also affects mental health
Conclusion
Obesity serious problem. Affecting all ages of people. Causes; are unhealthy food and inactive lifestyle. Solutions; making unhealthy food expensive and encourage healthy lifestyle.
Intro:
Obesity serious problem. Both children and adults affected. Let’s take look at causes and solutions.
Body 1
Main idea / Central idea Cause: The change in eating habits
Adults – busy with work or studies and so? what it means? no time for cooking healthy meal. And so? More consumption pre-packaged / frozen or fast food
Children: less traditional healthy food at home and school canteens. High intake of junk food e.g. hamburgers, chips, and fried chicken
Solution
Adults: government; increase the sales tax on junk food / encourage healthy lifestyle e.g. by campaigns
Children: more healthy food at home/ strict control of school canteens And so? decreases the intake of unhealthy food
Body 2
Main idea 2 Inactive lifestyle. Modern facilities make us lazy. Too much time in front of the screen / less exercise outdoors. energy transfers into fat and so? leads to health problems
Body 2
Solution for the Main idea 2
Controlling the screen timing / exercising. And so? burn energy, keep fit and healthy. Also affects mental health
Conclusion
Obesity serious problem. Affecting all ages of people. Causes; are unhealthy food and inactive lifestyle. Solutions; making unhealthy food expensive and encourage healthy lifestyle.
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