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2023/2024 yil uchun ingliz tilini o'rganib, IELTS, Multivelel, Linguaskill kabi sertifikatlar olish uchun qanday o'qimoqchisiz?
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Here is my essay written within 40 minutes and I've had it assessed by AI ( artificial intelligence) Some people think it is better to make more money rather than have free time, while others prefer to have more free time rather than making money.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
As demands are increasing in today’s materialistic world, some people prefer to earn more rather than have free time. However, some think that the opposite is a good idea. In my opinion, neither of these aspects should override one another if people want to lead balanced life.
A number of benefits can be derived by spending most of your time on making money. First of all, financial freedom allows people many opportunities. They can make purchases without putting limitations on their expenses. It’s true that most people put constant effort to save up money so that they can live in expensive houses and possess cars from brand companies. In addition, as people grow older, they build families and settle down, which means they have to think about the future of their children. The desire to have their off springs study at prestigious colleges and universities also requires financial stability. Therefore, the idea of earning more than free time sounds sensible.
Nevertheless, being so overwhelmed with financial prosperity, some people may not realise that they have missed the point. There are people who live a modest life, but enjoy the opportunity of devoting more time to their families and friends rather than pressurizing themselves with making more money. Such people prefer to lead unforced lifestyle so that they can enjoy their hobbies and be busy with other tasks that are meaningful to them.
In conclusion, the choice of earning more money or having free time reflects our personality and what we want to get from life. In my view, neither of these views should be overlooked, which means people should have balance between them.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
As demands are increasing in today’s materialistic world, some people prefer to earn more rather than have free time. However, some think that the opposite is a good idea. In my opinion, neither of these aspects should override one another if people want to lead balanced life.
A number of benefits can be derived by spending most of your time on making money. First of all, financial freedom allows people many opportunities. They can make purchases without putting limitations on their expenses. It’s true that most people put constant effort to save up money so that they can live in expensive houses and possess cars from brand companies. In addition, as people grow older, they build families and settle down, which means they have to think about the future of their children. The desire to have their off springs study at prestigious colleges and universities also requires financial stability. Therefore, the idea of earning more than free time sounds sensible.
Nevertheless, being so overwhelmed with financial prosperity, some people may not realise that they have missed the point. There are people who live a modest life, but enjoy the opportunity of devoting more time to their families and friends rather than pressurizing themselves with making more money. Such people prefer to lead unforced lifestyle so that they can enjoy their hobbies and be busy with other tasks that are meaningful to them.
In conclusion, the choice of earning more money or having free time reflects our personality and what we want to get from life. In my view, neither of these views should be overlooked, which means people should have balance between them.
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Here is my essay written within 40 minutes and I've had it assessed by AI ( artificial intelligence) Some people think it is better to make more money rather than have free time, while others prefer…
Feedback Task Response:
Estimated Band Score: 7.5
Your essay addresses the task well. You've presented both views and given a clear opinion. However, you could improve by providing a more detailed analysis of each perspective and by linking your main points more explicitly to your opinion. This will give your argument more depth and make your position clearer to the reader.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Estimated Band Score: 7.0
Your essay is logically organised and uses a range of cohesive devices ('however', 'nevertheless', 'in addition'). There's a clear introduction and conclusion, and each paragraph has a clear main idea. However, you can improve this score by ensuring that each paragraph develops a single main point and by using more varied linking words and phrases.
Lexical Resource:
Estimated Band Score: 8.0
You've used a good range of vocabulary and there's evidence of some less-common words and phrases. Spelling and word formation are generally accurate. To improve, aim to use even more precise and varied vocabulary. For example, instead of using 'money' repeatedly, you could use synonyms like 'wealth', 'income', or 'financial resources'.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy:
Estimated Band Score: 7.5
Your essay shows a good range of grammatical structures, and the majority of sentences are error-free. However, there are a few minor errors and awkward phrases. For example, 'off springs' should be 'offspring', and 'unforced lifestyle' could be better expressed as 'stress-free lifestyle' or 'relaxed lifestyle'. To improve, try to use a wider range of sentence structures and aim to eliminate these minor errors.
Overall Feedback:
You've done well in addressing the prompt and presenting a clear argument. To improve your score, focus on developing your points in more depth, using a wider range of vocabulary and grammatical structures, and ensuring all sentences and phrases are grammatically accurate. Be careful to avoid minor errors, as these can detract from the clarity of your writing. With these improvements, you could achieve a higher band score in the IELTS writing test. Well done and keep practicing!
Estimated Band Score: 7.5
Your essay addresses the task well. You've presented both views and given a clear opinion. However, you could improve by providing a more detailed analysis of each perspective and by linking your main points more explicitly to your opinion. This will give your argument more depth and make your position clearer to the reader.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Estimated Band Score: 7.0
Your essay is logically organised and uses a range of cohesive devices ('however', 'nevertheless', 'in addition'). There's a clear introduction and conclusion, and each paragraph has a clear main idea. However, you can improve this score by ensuring that each paragraph develops a single main point and by using more varied linking words and phrases.
Lexical Resource:
Estimated Band Score: 8.0
You've used a good range of vocabulary and there's evidence of some less-common words and phrases. Spelling and word formation are generally accurate. To improve, aim to use even more precise and varied vocabulary. For example, instead of using 'money' repeatedly, you could use synonyms like 'wealth', 'income', or 'financial resources'.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy:
Estimated Band Score: 7.5
Your essay shows a good range of grammatical structures, and the majority of sentences are error-free. However, there are a few minor errors and awkward phrases. For example, 'off springs' should be 'offspring', and 'unforced lifestyle' could be better expressed as 'stress-free lifestyle' or 'relaxed lifestyle'. To improve, try to use a wider range of sentence structures and aim to eliminate these minor errors.
Overall Feedback:
You've done well in addressing the prompt and presenting a clear argument. To improve your score, focus on developing your points in more depth, using a wider range of vocabulary and grammatical structures, and ensuring all sentences and phrases are grammatically accurate. Be careful to avoid minor errors, as these can detract from the clarity of your writing. With these improvements, you could achieve a higher band score in the IELTS writing test. Well done and keep practicing!
Speaking and Writing have been the areas of the IELTS test where students couldn't progress without feedback from the teacher. I wonder if this can be the case any longer with such a detailed feedback provided from AI
Xar bir o'qituvchining noyob va boshqalarga o'xshamagan sifatlari bo'ladi. 'Flexible Teacher' kursimizda qatnashayotgan ustozlarimizga ingliz tili o'qitish bo'yicha ulashayotgan kontentlarimiz ularga manfaatli bo'layotganini ijobiy fikrlaridan ham bo'lib olsak bo'ladi.👆 Ustozlarimizning kasbiy rivojlanishida o'z hissamizni qo'shayotganimizdan xursandmiz.
There are a few key reasons why paying attention to accurate article usage is important in writing, especially for IELTS:
🔸Clarity and precise meaning
Articles specify nouns as definite or indefinite. Using them correctly makes the meaning clear.
🔸Grammar accuracy
Articles are an essential part of English grammar. Incorrect usage can undermine how grammatically strong a text seems.
🔸Reader comprehension
Readers more easily understand ideas when they are presented definitively versus vaguely. Articles help specify references.
🔸Language proficiency level
Native/fluent speakers have mastered articles intuitively. Correct usage demonstrates a high level of language control.
🔸Clarity and precise meaning
Articles specify nouns as definite or indefinite. Using them correctly makes the meaning clear.
🔸Grammar accuracy
Articles are an essential part of English grammar. Incorrect usage can undermine how grammatically strong a text seems.
🔸Reader comprehension
Readers more easily understand ideas when they are presented definitively versus vaguely. Articles help specify references.
🔸Language proficiency level
Native/fluent speakers have mastered articles intuitively. Correct usage demonstrates a high level of language control.
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🔍Fano ahliga ko’p so’zlamoq – maqbul emas, ko’p eshitmoq – matlub va yaxshidir. Eshitmoq kishini to’latadi, aytmoq bo’shatadi… Ko’p degan yanglishadi, ko’p yegan, ko’p yiqiladi. Tan kasalliklarining asosi ko’p yemakdir, ko’ngil kasallarini asosi ko’p demak.…
Rosa zamonaviylashib, yengil yelpi narsalarga o’rganib qolganimizdanmi, ruhiyat olami ham rosa chanqab qolgan ekan. Shuni ozgina bo’lsa ham qondiraylik!
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Isn't it a similar experience?😁
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Isn't it a similar experience?😁
Look at this comment on this video from youtube. Continue it if you wish in the comment section
We just use the social media wrong
Let's learn how to use it
Making art with it not just messing around posting our lives on
Let's make friends instead of making enemies on our friends
Let's be thankful with what we have not envy others for their goods
Let's do what we like not what they like
Let's be more us than they
Let's be happier since life is short
Let's....(I let you continue)
We just use the social media wrong
Let's learn how to use it
Making art with it not just messing around posting our lives on
Let's make friends instead of making enemies on our friends
Let's be thankful with what we have not envy others for their goods
Let's do what we like not what they like
Let's be more us than they
Let's be happier since life is short
Let's....(I let you continue)
Hayitov ELT
2023/2024 yil uchun ingliz tilini o'rganib, IELTS, Multivelel, Linguaskill kabi sertifikatlar olish uchun qanday o'qimoqchisiz?
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